Arteriole (edit2)
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(07-11-2016, 10:30 PM)ellajam Wrote:  This was fun to read. I had a problem with this line:
which laid on the ground a short distance apart.

I get its reference to the title but it seems to refer to the scar, or is it the heart, either way I don't get what it is set apart from. I'll keep trying to get it but I'm sure you can clarify this.

Thanks for the read and the dip into the dictionary. Smile
I agree, the phrasing here is rather confusing. It's meant to refer to the heart.
Thank you for your comment!
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Messages In This Thread
Arteriole (edit2) - by Shay - 07-11-2016, 09:16 PM
RE: Metarteriole - by ellajam - 07-11-2016, 10:30 PM
RE: Metarteriole - by Shay - 07-11-2016, 11:31 PM
RE: Metarteriole - by Lizzie - 07-12-2016, 12:18 PM
RE: Metarteriole - by Shay - 07-13-2016, 01:14 AM
RE: Arteriole (edit #1) - by Erthona - 07-16-2016, 04:16 AM
RE: Arteriole (edit #1) - by Shay - 07-16-2016, 09:27 AM
RE: Arteriole (edit #1) - by poet-rice - 08-06-2016, 09:16 AM
RE: Arteriole (edit2) - by Shay - 08-14-2016, 01:52 AM



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