Arteriole (edit2)

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Edited Version:

I will spare you the details
we were both orphans of impulses
playing to tenebrous lilts 
while widening in this vein; 

you left me with a seeming scar 
encircling the illusive entrance to my heart 
which laid on the ground a short distance apart 
- this is not a metaphor -
why did you watch the blood thinning from afar?
"I couldn't stand the sight of red liquid"
- I just realised, you were pointing at my lipstick.

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I will spare you the trivia: 
we were both orphans of impulses
playing to tenebrous lilts
- widening in this vein;

you left me with an oneiric scar, 
encircling the illusive entrance to my heart,
which lays on the ground a short distance apart 
- this is not a metaphor - 
why did you watch the blood thinning from afar?
"I couldn't stand the sight of red liquid"
- I just realised, you were pointing at my lipstick.



I will spare you the trivia: 
we were both orphan of impulses
playing to tenebrous lilts
- widening in this vein;

you left me with an oneiric scar, 
encircling the illusive entrance to my heart,
which laid on the ground a short distance apart 
- this is not a metaphor - 
why did you watch the blood thinning from afar?
"I couldn't stand the sight of red liquid"
- I just realised, you were pointing at my lipstick.