07-10-2016, 02:59 AM
I clicked on the link to your soundcloud page. I didn't know what to make of this poem when I read it. When I heard you sing it with those haunting stretched out notes, in your melodic and melancholy tone, I liked it a bit better.
My ear wanted to hear you do something different with the repeating line. Sounded like a chorus, but to me the way you ended the word "dreams" sounded clumsy. It was like you didn't know how you were going to sing it each time. You seemed unsure of yourself.
My ear wanted to hear you do something different with the repeating line. Sounded like a chorus, but to me the way you ended the word "dreams" sounded clumsy. It was like you didn't know how you were going to sing it each time. You seemed unsure of yourself.