How We Have Changed (Revision 1.2)

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How We Have Changed (Revision 1.2)

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07-06-2016, 06:09 AM

(06-27-2016, 07:40 PM)Achebe Wrote:
Quote:The sallow light rests on you,
holds you motionless,
immutable in amber.

I love 'immutable in amber - suggestive of perfection (perfect preservation), the death and fossilisation of feelings, an eternal trap, etc - the meanings are varied and profound.

Appreciate the comments, Achebe. I"m glad the amber change worked for you.

Best,

Todd

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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How We Have Changed (Revision 1.2) - by Todd - 06-22-2016, 07:30 AM

RE: How We Have Changed - by Lizzie - 06-22-2016, 01:23 PM

RE: How We Have Changed - by Achebe - 06-22-2016, 08:44 PM

RE: How We Have Changed - by kolemath - 06-22-2016, 10:30 PM

RE: How We Have Changed - by Todd - 06-23-2016, 12:44 AM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1) - by kolemath - 06-23-2016, 09:14 AM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1) - by Todd - 06-23-2016, 09:35 AM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1.1) - by Todd - 06-23-2016, 11:46 AM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1) - by Lizzie - 06-23-2016, 12:18 PM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1.1) - by Todd - 06-23-2016, 10:33 PM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1.1) - by tectak - 06-24-2016, 02:49 PM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1.1) - by Todd - 06-24-2016, 11:26 PM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1.2) - by RiverNotch - 06-27-2016, 07:04 PM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1.2) - by Todd - 07-06-2016, 06:08 AM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1.2) - by Achebe - 06-27-2016, 07:40 PM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1.2) - by Todd - 07-06-2016, 06:09 AM

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