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For the Heights (Edit 2)

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#11

07-05-2016, 05:23 PM

Damn man, you need to bump the thread back to the top if you've done an edit or no-one will notice.

Don't worry I'll get this one

Bump

I like the latest edit that you've done, it's definitely the best yet, it's very atmospheric and less cryptic. It's a shame that you had to lose the 'Kings Crown' line but it was the right thing to do, you definitely need to use that line somehow for another poem it's a winner. I'll get back to you and offer some crit on your latest edit, for the moment just wanted to say great edit Thumbsup

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wae aye man ye radgie

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For the Heights (Edit 2) - by Weeded - 06-12-2016, 04:14 PM

RE: For the Heights - by Joseph Didis - 06-13-2016, 03:02 AM

RE: For the Heights - by Weeded - 06-14-2016, 09:09 AM

RE: For the Heights - by Erthona - 06-13-2016, 03:16 AM

RE: For the Heights - by homer1950 - 06-17-2016, 12:22 PM

RE: For the Heights - by Andrias - 06-18-2016, 05:31 AM

RE: For the Heights - by Vanity - 06-19-2016, 04:23 PM

RE: For the Heights - by Weeded - 06-21-2016, 12:03 PM

RE: For the Heights (Edit 1) - by Magpie - 06-23-2016, 05:51 PM

RE: For the Heights (Edit 1) - by Weeded - 06-24-2016, 09:51 AM

RE: For the Heights (Edit 2) - by Magpie - 07-05-2016, 05:23 PM

RE: For the Heights (Edit 2) - by Weeded - 07-07-2016, 05:51 AM

RE: For the Heights (Edit 2) - by RiverNotch - 07-09-2016, 11:36 PM

RE: For the Heights (Edit 2) - by Weeded - 07-16-2016, 12:05 PM

RE: For the Heights (Edit 2) - by amejadcc - 07-28-2016, 12:05 AM

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