07-02-2016, 05:27 PM
I enjoyed reading this, although I'm not quite sure I "got it" - but if I enjoyed reading it I guess I got enough from it. Basically I saw a picture of modern American escapism - "I gotta get out of here".
One suggestion: I presume the 4th is the 4th of July, due to the present date (and the title), but if it wasn't the beginning of July, I might not have guessed that. I'm not an American though, so Americans might pick up on that a little easier.
One suggestion: I presume the 4th is the 4th of July, due to the present date (and the title), but if it wasn't the beginning of July, I might not have guessed that. I'm not an American though, so Americans might pick up on that a little easier.