06-30-2016, 11:12 PM
(06-30-2016, 10:35 PM)shemthepenman Wrote:I like this very much. Wouldn't change a things after that first edit.(06-30-2016, 06:35 PM)RiverNotch Wrote:thanks, you are definitely right about 'then'. it actually makes a big difference. thanks again!(06-30-2016, 04:55 PM)shemthepenman Wrote: Ledayeof course! And I used to teach English. Thanks. I have lead for brains. And yes you may be right about 'then'. I'll have a look. See if I like it better that way.
Oh, I presume you mean 'then' instead of 'and'?

of course! And I used to teach English. Thanks. I have lead for brains. And yes you may be right about 'then'. I'll have a look. See if I like it better that way.