The Sallman Head -- edit 3

[Lizzie]

if you ever feel like my reading is off, don't hesitate to call me out! 

I don't think I'm allowed to, in all seriousness. And, they say that, if you have to defend or explain you work, then your poem has failed. I fail all the time, I'm just too proud to admit it sometimes

The reactions I'm getting to this piece are all over the map. Some people think it's full of flaws and others think it's provocative in a good way. I'm always so excited to put my pieces up to see what people think, then I come away more confused than ever! I guess that's the process

Anyway, I just wanted to make sure that we were good ><