06-25-2016, 12:58 PM
The poem could have some minor cuts. Could could could could could. These are just some quick suggestions along the line.
The upstairs room feels like a spaceship.
A vessel to conduct my extracurricular endeavors.
to Malaysia,
Alaska.
save my sick mother.
the inner workings of Walt Whitman's mind.
I've entered a ship with the windows closed.
That contains all my gear for anything or anywhere.
Mental preparedness and physical appropriation
to make it happen.
a feeling of inspired contentedness.
This is my place.
I'm ready.
I think I'll go downstairs...
The upstairs room feels like a spaceship.
A vessel to conduct my extracurricular endeavors.
to Malaysia,
Alaska.
save my sick mother.
the inner workings of Walt Whitman's mind.
I've entered a ship with the windows closed.
That contains all my gear for anything or anywhere.
Mental preparedness and physical appropriation
to make it happen.
a feeling of inspired contentedness.
This is my place.
I'm ready.
I think I'll go downstairs...

