06-25-2016, 11:15 AM
Dale: thank you for taking time with the piece and for teaching me some new tricks! I love dashes, so I'll be making good use of those. I'll try to pay more attention to my commas going forward.
Todd: Thank you for helping me trim the excess and the distractions. I appreciate the honesty and encouragement. I personalized the 'ugly side' line like you suggested; is it ok that those two stanzas now both end in the same word?
Todd: Thank you for helping me trim the excess and the distractions. I appreciate the honesty and encouragement. I personalized the 'ugly side' line like you suggested; is it ok that those two stanzas now both end in the same word?