How We Have Changed (Revision 1.2)

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How We Have Changed (Revision 1.2)

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06-24-2016, 11:26 PM

Thank you Tom. I'll definitely take some of the notes. I'm thinking about a few of the other points you raised (it will probably take time and distance to determine the next revision. I'll probably step away from this one for awhile.

Appreciate the feedback,

Todd

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How We Have Changed (Revision 1.2) - by Todd - 06-22-2016, 07:30 AM

RE: How We Have Changed - by Lizzie - 06-22-2016, 01:23 PM

RE: How We Have Changed - by Achebe - 06-22-2016, 08:44 PM

RE: How We Have Changed - by kolemath - 06-22-2016, 10:30 PM

RE: How We Have Changed - by Todd - 06-23-2016, 12:44 AM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1) - by kolemath - 06-23-2016, 09:14 AM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1) - by Todd - 06-23-2016, 09:35 AM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1.1) - by Todd - 06-23-2016, 11:46 AM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1) - by Lizzie - 06-23-2016, 12:18 PM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1.1) - by Todd - 06-23-2016, 10:33 PM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1.1) - by tectak - 06-24-2016, 02:49 PM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1.1) - by Todd - 06-24-2016, 11:26 PM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1.2) - by RiverNotch - 06-27-2016, 07:04 PM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1.2) - by Todd - 07-06-2016, 06:08 AM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1.2) - by Achebe - 06-27-2016, 07:40 PM

RE: How We Have Changed (Revision 1.2) - by Todd - 07-06-2016, 06:09 AM

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