06-24-2016, 09:51 AM
What up Mark,
I've got to admit... I didn't do much homework before starting this piece. I have the tendency to have an initial idea and jump the gun on sharing it, but it kinda works for me cuz the point of the workshop is to, well workshop but still I hate wasting a reader's time and even edit one is feeling that way.
Basically I wanted to find a way to modernize the 'fire and brimstone' cliche and what I came across was sulfur mining. I got as far as your quick google search, saw some images and thought "wow this is exactly what I want to write about,"
after reading your suggestions i can already see a more advanced poets interpretation on this illustrious subject(wish i woulda known about this for napm), that said it looks like ive definitely got my work cut out for me. thanks for your time, and thanks for your suggestions, youve given me alot of valuable direction for this one,
mike
I've got to admit... I didn't do much homework before starting this piece. I have the tendency to have an initial idea and jump the gun on sharing it, but it kinda works for me cuz the point of the workshop is to, well workshop but still I hate wasting a reader's time and even edit one is feeling that way.
Basically I wanted to find a way to modernize the 'fire and brimstone' cliche and what I came across was sulfur mining. I got as far as your quick google search, saw some images and thought "wow this is exactly what I want to write about,"
after reading your suggestions i can already see a more advanced poets interpretation on this illustrious subject(wish i woulda known about this for napm), that said it looks like ive definitely got my work cut out for me. thanks for your time, and thanks for your suggestions, youve given me alot of valuable direction for this one,
mike
Crit away