06-23-2016, 11:23 PM
(06-22-2016, 04:09 PM)lizziep Wrote: I feel like I should apologize to the forum for this one -- it's like the flatulation that's still stinking up the room a day later.Lizz,
My apologies to all who have had their senses assaulted.
I'm telling myself that we all get to let out one big stinker, and hopefully I've got it all out of my system now.
This poem was not an insult by any round of critique. It's gained the attention, it's gained, because people like it; because I liked it. Nothing any us write is flawless or without some room for revision. The best poets are edited; the best revise. I honestly enjoyed reading it and only wanted to help in the revision process. Don't be so hard on yourself, really.
Good work Lizz,
Luna
In your own, each bone comes alive
the skeleton jangles in its perfunctory sleeve....
(Chris Martin)
the skeleton jangles in its perfunctory sleeve....
(Chris Martin)