For the Heights (Edit 2)

For the Heights (Edit 2)

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06-21-2016, 12:03 PM

Andrias,
thanks for your feedback, your comments on the second stanza are especially helpful.
mike

V,
thanks for the feedback, ill definitely work on your suggestions, thanks!
mike

Homer,
will do, thanks,
mike

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For the Heights (Edit 2) - by Weeded - 06-12-2016, 04:14 PM

RE: For the Heights - by Weeded - 06-14-2016, 09:09 AM

RE: For the Heights - by Erthona - 06-13-2016, 03:16 AM

RE: For the Heights - by homer1950 - 06-17-2016, 12:22 PM

RE: For the Heights - by Andrias - 06-18-2016, 05:31 AM

RE: For the Heights - by Vanity - 06-19-2016, 04:23 PM

RE: For the Heights - by Weeded - 06-21-2016, 12:03 PM

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