Imagining Disaster, previously "Stuck," edit 1
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Love the imagery,about the sap and tears.

The centimeter thing may be different because you are in a country that uses the metric system, I am assuming. We americans like our inches and feet haha

I like your use of rhyme however isn't always necessary but you do it well
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RE: Stuck - by Achebe - 06-06-2016, 05:55 PM
RE: Stuck - by Lizzie - 07-05-2016, 03:40 PM
RE: Stuck - by ariii - 06-08-2016, 11:40 AM
RE: Stuck - by Lizzie - 06-09-2016, 07:34 AM
RE: Stuck - by Vanity - 06-08-2016, 04:25 PM
RE: Stuck - by lam523 - 06-21-2016, 07:51 AM
RE: Stuck - by LunaDeLore - 06-22-2016, 12:20 PM
RE: Stuck - by Lizzie - 06-22-2016, 04:09 PM
RE: Stuck - by ellajam - 06-22-2016, 06:37 PM
RE: Stuck - by Lizzie - 06-24-2016, 02:50 PM
RE: Stuck - by LunaDeLore - 06-23-2016, 11:23 PM
RE: Stuck - by Achebe - 06-22-2016, 09:49 PM
RE: Stuck - by rhymeguy - 06-29-2016, 03:15 AM
RE: Stuck - by Lizzie - 06-30-2016, 07:53 AM
RE: Stuck - by ashleighimaginatively - 07-04-2016, 04:35 PM



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