Vestiges (ballade) Revision 4

Vestiges (ballade) Revision 4

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06-17-2016, 05:36 PM

D. - Those are very helpful suggestions. I especially like the turn on "loss conquers gains in victory," exactly what I was after.

And: "Spooked horses whimper all in vain," again more clearly the right image.

Thanks very much, RC

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Vestiges (ballade) Revision 4 - by RC James - 05-17-2016, 10:38 AM

RE: Vestiges (ballade) - by Achebe - 05-17-2016, 06:38 PM

RE: Vestiges (ballade) - by Achebe - 05-18-2016, 03:10 PM

RE: Vestiges (ballade) Revision - by RC James - 05-18-2016, 09:18 PM

RE: Vestiges (ballade) Revision - by Achebe - 06-17-2016, 04:13 AM

RE: Vestiges (ballade) Revision 2 - by RC James - 06-17-2016, 08:57 AM

RE: Vestiges (ballade) Revision 2 - by D.Russo - 06-17-2016, 12:12 PM

RE: Vestiges (ballade) Revision 2 - by RC James - 06-17-2016, 05:36 PM

RE: Vestiges (ballade) Revision 4 - by RC James - 10-07-2016, 07:05 AM

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