06-16-2016, 11:55 PM
I think the picture itself speaks well enough, and so do the words, and together they really are great, but their blending, with the words being placed directly in the picture, distracts from both, what with the words being out of order, and worse still with the image being practically vandalized. I'd much prefer if the words were separate, say, if this were a card, drawn on the back, or if a film, spoken -- here, simply written below the untouched picture. But if I really had to choose, edit 1b please, since sunrise needs not be said. And I like the title, although mainly because not even the Ancient Greek princess came to mind -- I was too distracted by electromagnetism.