06-16-2016, 09:30 AM
Thanks for pointing out the awkward rhythms and words, milo! meter/diction revision posted!!
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Baby's Breath (edit) - by kolemath - 06-02-2016, 01:29 PM
RE: Baby Breath - by UselessBlueprint - 06-02-2016, 02:35 PM
RE: Baby Breath - by kolemath - 06-02-2016, 02:51 PM
RE: Baby Breath - by Lizzie - 06-05-2016, 04:07 PM
RE: Baby Breath - by DavidF - 06-06-2016, 07:23 AM
RE: Baby Breath - by kolemath - 06-09-2016, 09:36 AM
RE: Baby Breath - by DavidF - 06-09-2016, 11:17 AM
RE: Baby Breath - by milo - 06-09-2016, 12:48 PM
RE: Baby Breath - by kolemath - 06-16-2016, 09:30 AM
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