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the first taste - edit 2
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06-14-2016, 09:22 AM
Thanks a lot, milo! I've posted a revision for meter. I begin with trochees and end with iambs--(at least i think that's what's happening)--plus a line of all stressed syllables. I'm hoping this contrast in meter captures the shift in content too.
I appreciate your readings!
Thanks to this Forum
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the first taste - edit 2 - by kolemath - 05-29-2016, 11:48 AM
RE: the first taste - by Caleb Murdock - 05-29-2016, 03:00 PM
RE: the first taste - by justcloudy - 05-30-2016, 12:24 AM
RE: the first taste - by Caleb Murdock - 05-30-2016, 02:52 PM
RE: the first taste - by Lizzie - 05-31-2016, 02:50 AM
RE: the first taste - by kolemath - 06-03-2016, 04:44 AM
RE: the first taste - by kolemath - 06-12-2016, 11:39 AM
RE: the first taste - by milo - 06-12-2016, 12:56 PM
RE: the first taste - by kolemath - 06-14-2016, 09:22 AM
RE: the first taste - edit 2 - by justcloudy - 06-15-2016, 06:33 AM
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