06-14-2016, 06:24 AM
@Andrias - Not sure how proper a proceeding this is, but if this poem were to appear in a far-future textbook on dead languages, it might be annotated as follows. Glad you liked the parts you indicated, but I hesitate to include explanations.
Wagnerian Physics
Adolf Hitler, operatically(1) inspired,
revered Norse eschatology -
the circle-cycle of the Ring(2)
forged of magic metal(3)
rendering all-powerful the one who held it.
(Understanding Wagner(1), so he said,
was vital to comprehending
National Socialism(4).)
But Hitler fell, Wehrmacht(5) and Luftwaffe(6)
shattered swords(7), his trolling U-boats(8)
vanquished, body cindered on a fire of gasoline.
How badly he misunderstood
his dear myth’s prophecy!
The magic metal, light-Uranium(9),
existed. Jewish scientists(10) -
mere “dwarves” in his race-hierarchy -
helped forge it into hollow spheres(11),
rings of pent cosmic energy
which conferred all-power to
his enemies instead.
Had Hitler proffered love to Jews
with high priority to forging light-Uranium,
Plutonium(12), named after elder gods(13),
he could have held the Ring.
Instead he burned to ash in twilight, trapped
within dark confines of the myth
whose shining end(14) he never understood.
Footnotes:
I need to learn how to do subscripts on the Pen!
Wagnerian Physics
Adolf Hitler, operatically(1) inspired,
revered Norse eschatology -
the circle-cycle of the Ring(2)
forged of magic metal(3)
rendering all-powerful the one who held it.
(Understanding Wagner(1), so he said,
was vital to comprehending
National Socialism(4).)
But Hitler fell, Wehrmacht(5) and Luftwaffe(6)
shattered swords(7), his trolling U-boats(8)
vanquished, body cindered on a fire of gasoline.
How badly he misunderstood
his dear myth’s prophecy!
The magic metal, light-Uranium(9),
existed. Jewish scientists(10) -
mere “dwarves” in his race-hierarchy -
helped forge it into hollow spheres(11),
rings of pent cosmic energy
which conferred all-power to
his enemies instead.
Had Hitler proffered love to Jews
with high priority to forging light-Uranium,
Plutonium(12), named after elder gods(13),
he could have held the Ring.
Instead he burned to ash in twilight, trapped
within dark confines of the myth
whose shining end(14) he never understood.
Footnotes:
I need to learn how to do subscripts on the Pen!
Non-practicing atheist

