For the Heights (Edit 2)
#3
I like,

"the peak confuses heights
like crowns do kings."

but other than that I really have no idea what this pom is trying to do (actually I don't know what that is trying to do, but it's a fun simile), so I really can't offer any critique.

Best,

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Messages In This Thread
For the Heights (Edit 2) - by Weeded - 06-12-2016, 04:14 PM
RE: For the Heights - by Joseph Didis - 06-13-2016, 03:02 AM
RE: For the Heights - by Weeded - 06-14-2016, 09:09 AM
RE: For the Heights - by Erthona - 06-13-2016, 03:16 AM
RE: For the Heights - by homer1950 - 06-17-2016, 12:22 PM
RE: For the Heights - by Andrias - 06-18-2016, 05:31 AM
RE: For the Heights - by Vanity - 06-19-2016, 04:23 PM
RE: For the Heights - by Weeded - 06-21-2016, 12:03 PM
RE: For the Heights (Edit 1) - by Magpie - 06-23-2016, 05:51 PM
RE: For the Heights (Edit 1) - by Weeded - 06-24-2016, 09:51 AM
RE: For the Heights (Edit 2) - by Magpie - 07-05-2016, 05:23 PM
RE: For the Heights (Edit 2) - by Weeded - 07-07-2016, 05:51 AM
RE: For the Heights (Edit 2) - by RiverNotch - 07-09-2016, 11:36 PM
RE: For the Heights (Edit 2) - by Weeded - 07-16-2016, 12:05 PM
RE: For the Heights (Edit 2) - by amejadcc - 07-28-2016, 12:05 AM



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