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Suburban Camouflage
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06-12-2016, 01:20 AM
(06-11-2016, 04:50 PM)Achebe Wrote: Wow. I loved this. It's not easy to write a narrative this long without becoming boring. I will come back later with some more useful feedback, but wanted to shout out an appreciation anyway.Thank you! I've been stewing on this one for a while, and I really needed some talented eyes to help me prune and snip. I look forward to your feedback (-: |
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Suburban Camouflage - by Vanity - 06-11-2016, 04:41 PM
RE: Suburban Camouflage - by Achebe - 06-11-2016, 04:50 PM
RE: Suburban Camouflage - by Vanity - 06-12-2016, 01:20 AM
RE: Suburban Camouflage - by Magpie - 06-12-2016, 03:57 AM
RE: Suburban Camouflage - by Vanity - 06-12-2016, 05:19 PM
RE: Suburban Camouflage - by Achebe - 06-14-2016, 10:14 PM
RE: Suburban Camouflage - by Wjames - 06-15-2016, 03:22 PM
RE: Suburban Camouflage - by Vanity - 06-15-2016, 04:06 PM
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