The Epitaph of Gurash the Brash

[Slix343]

This is a workshop. do you honestly plan to workshop this? It's two sentences. No offense, but I don't see much poetry here.  These are just two statements.


it was no surprise that when it rained, I got wet..
but it was a suprise when I got wet, it did not rain.

Well. Ok then.

No offense taken! Quite the contrary. I want to see what I can do with such a smaller scale poem. Though if I should move it elsewhere then I probably will.