06-08-2016, 12:47 PM 
	
	
	
		This is a workshop. do you honestly plan to workshop this? It's two sentences. No offense, but I don't see much poetry here.  These are just two statements. 
it was no surprise that when it rained, I got wet..
but it was a suprise when I got wet, it did not rain.
Well. Ok then.
	
	
	
it was no surprise that when it rained, I got wet..
but it was a suprise when I got wet, it did not rain.
Well. Ok then.

 

