06-08-2016, 12:03 PM
This poem makes me think of gender identity and alike issues. The last line in particular seems to me to describe some sort of lack of satisfaction with what "woman" is. However I feel this poem is very much just staying in that one note and says little else. Yeah being a woman is arbitrary and annoying, so what? Most of this poem seems to be using clever wordplay to sound cool. "I am the Puma and the meat." These may get the point across and sound cool but there is little actual substance to it. Nowhere else to really go.