06-08-2016, 11:35 AM
This has no real structure, no rhyme or imagery.
What are you trying to accomplish with this?
It reads like the confessions of a teenager with social anxiety issues.
But I can relate, I've been there, the substance is all about you and how YOU feel
It's too literal and leaves nothing to the imagination.
No telling a story, it just feels like something you'd say to a therapist.
No offense.
What are you trying to accomplish with this?
It reads like the confessions of a teenager with social anxiety issues.
But I can relate, I've been there, the substance is all about you and how YOU feel
It's too literal and leaves nothing to the imagination.
No telling a story, it just feels like something you'd say to a therapist.
No offense.