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[Leanne]

Hi David, thanks for your comments and I'm glad it got you thinking. On your suggestions -- rooting in the mud is something pigs do. More permanent objects are rooted -- and of course mud is a bit more slippery than nice solid soil, so the foundations shift and there's not much that object can do about it. I can't change to 'would you ever have guessed' for two reasons: one, it ruins the meter and two, I just wouldn't say that. I try to write in language that I would use or it seems disingenuous to me.

I appreciate you stopping by, thanks again.