Imagining Disaster, previously "Stuck," edit 1
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Pen a centimeter from the page,
       poised—
       like a statue:
       Could I stick this way?

Could sticky sap encase me,
swamping my throat, swallowing
my words, muzzling my mouth?
I'd be stopped in a lollipop,
       with my pen
       as the stick!

Could salty tears seal me,
—a corroded Tin Man—
my surface quiescent,
       permanently
       paused?

Maybe I'd stick like Zen legends,
mummifying through meditation,
becoming a picture—
       a pose—
       in rigid repose.

Maybe the rust slithering up my skin
is not a fetter but rather
a rattlesnake's rigor as I writhe
up in coils and ready my venom,
       poising myself
       to strike.


Original Version, entitled "Stuck"

Could I stick this way:
pen a centimeter from the page,
       poised –
       like a statue?

Could sap encase me, salty tears seal me?
Could I corrode like a rusty relic
paraded through the streets –
the patron saint of marble tongues?
Would pilgrims pray at my pen,
       pausing –
       like statues?

Maybe I'd stick like Zen legends,
mummifying through meditation,
becoming a picture – a pose – a piece of prose,
my pen a centimeter from the page,
       poised –
       like a snake.
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Messages In This Thread
Imagining Disaster, previously "Stuck," edit 1 - by Lizzie - 06-06-2016, 12:38 PM
RE: Stuck - by Achebe - 06-06-2016, 05:55 PM
RE: Stuck - by Lizzie - 07-05-2016, 03:40 PM
RE: Stuck - by ariii - 06-08-2016, 11:40 AM
RE: Stuck - by Lizzie - 06-09-2016, 07:34 AM
RE: Stuck - by Vanity - 06-08-2016, 04:25 PM
RE: Stuck - by lam523 - 06-21-2016, 07:51 AM
RE: Stuck - by LunaDeLore - 06-22-2016, 12:20 PM
RE: Stuck - by Lizzie - 06-22-2016, 04:09 PM
RE: Stuck - by ellajam - 06-22-2016, 06:37 PM
RE: Stuck - by Lizzie - 06-24-2016, 02:50 PM
RE: Stuck - by LunaDeLore - 06-23-2016, 11:23 PM
RE: Stuck - by Achebe - 06-22-2016, 09:49 PM
RE: Stuck - by rhymeguy - 06-29-2016, 03:15 AM
RE: Stuck - by Lizzie - 06-30-2016, 07:53 AM
RE: Stuck - by ashleighimaginatively - 07-04-2016, 04:35 PM



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