The Unbearable Fragility of Infatuation

[Marymic]

this is a very moving and evoking poem, quite delicate
It took me a while to get that it wasn't about incest :-)

the love and the ambivalence  comes through beatifully
I especially love the line 
We hold in cold hands

these fragments of choice

what about building on from this in the next line


that build each path we become

in words and in voice