06-04-2016, 09:08 PM
my love for that last line grows, heartbeat hies can be taken so many ways, rushes, flees, increases, runs towards, two simple words that create a huge variety of paths. This for me is a great example of finding the perfect word so that ambiguity vs clarity is no longer the issue and it no longer matters what exactly the poet was aiming at because they have opened a door for me to walk down my own path.
Again, good one.
Again, good one.
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