Sometimes, a star is born

[RiverNotch]

Sometimes, a star is born

Sometimes, a star is born
clasping the cold blue firmament; comma instead of semicolon?
Cyprian Cytherea’s ornament PEDANTBEAR: Man, two epithets in one line, and both coming from exact opposites (Cytherea, that Aphrodite was born on Cythera; Cyprian, that she was born on Cyprus)? Author, make up your mind! xD
Not sure if it'd matter to the general reader, though. And yeah, "Cyprian Cytherea" is fun to say -- Kiprian Kitheriyyah! Kiprian Kitheriyyah! Still, annoys me to no end --- PEDANTBEAR, out!
resplendently worn.
Sometimes, the sea wind flies
splat in the face of a logical man,
bespectacled orangoutan. It's orangutan either way, mate. Or if you're French, orang-outan.
Sometimes, his heartbeat hies. I love the repeating sometimes's and "heartbeat hies", too -- saying it, HEARTBEAT HIES, really gives me arrhythmias. 

Real winner for me too.


.....or should I say star?