War Games

[Achebe]

I find that such poems lose their credibility in the first person. Otherwise, a very readable piece, if faintly hysterical and chock-ful of enjambments.
Okay, I guess what I'm saying is that I don't like this one as much as your other pomes.

Edit: I interpreted this to be a take on refugees. The comment about credibility coming from a guess that very rarely would a non-native English speaking refugee be able to write the above.