Without Laces (formerly called - Now I Wear Slip On Shoes)

Without Laces (formerly called - Now I Wear Slip On Shoes)

Achebe Offline

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06-02-2016, 06:06 PM

It was mysterious before and macabre now. Kinda like 'jingles from Abu Ghraib'. Not too hot.
I think you need a summary at the end to soften the blow. I vote for reinstating the original line.

~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

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Without Laces (formerly called - Now I Wear Slip On Shoes) - by Magpie - 06-02-2016, 02:34 AM

RE: Slip On Shoes - by Todd - 06-02-2016, 05:23 AM

RE: Slip On Shoes - by Magpie - 06-02-2016, 07:57 AM

RE: Now I Wear Slip On Shoes - by Lizzie - 06-02-2016, 08:53 AM

RE: Now I Wear Slip On Shoes - by Magpie - 06-02-2016, 11:42 PM

RE: Now I Wear Slip On Shoes - by Achebe - 06-02-2016, 06:06 PM

RE: Now I Wear Slip On Shoes - by RiverNotch - 06-02-2016, 07:31 PM

RE: Without Laces (formerly called - Now I Wear Slip On Shoes) - by Magpie - 06-05-2016, 09:50 AM

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