Without Laces (formerly called - Now I Wear Slip On Shoes)

Without Laces (formerly called - Now I Wear Slip On Shoes)

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Metavariable loon, sir.

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06-02-2016, 07:57 AM

(06-02-2016, 05:23 AM)Todd Wrote: Hi Mark,

Simple suggestion, replace your title with the last line of your poem. End the poem on stroke.

Like it.

Todd

Thanks Todd, that works so much better now, much appreciated,

Mark

wae aye man ye radgie

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Without Laces (formerly called - Now I Wear Slip On Shoes) - by Magpie - 06-02-2016, 02:34 AM

RE: Slip On Shoes - by Todd - 06-02-2016, 05:23 AM

RE: Slip On Shoes - by Magpie - 06-02-2016, 07:57 AM

RE: Now I Wear Slip On Shoes - by Lizzie - 06-02-2016, 08:53 AM

RE: Now I Wear Slip On Shoes - by Magpie - 06-02-2016, 11:42 PM

RE: Now I Wear Slip On Shoes - by Achebe - 06-02-2016, 06:06 PM

RE: Now I Wear Slip On Shoes - by RiverNotch - 06-02-2016, 07:31 PM

RE: Without Laces (formerly called - Now I Wear Slip On Shoes) - by Magpie - 06-05-2016, 09:50 AM

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