Without Laces (formerly called - Now I Wear Slip On Shoes)
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Hi Mark,

Simple suggestion, replace your title with the last line of your poem. End the poem on stroke.

Like it.

Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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RE: Slip On Shoes - by Todd - 06-02-2016, 05:23 AM
RE: Slip On Shoes - by Magpie - 06-02-2016, 07:57 AM
RE: Now I Wear Slip On Shoes - by Lizzie - 06-02-2016, 08:53 AM
RE: Now I Wear Slip On Shoes - by Magpie - 06-02-2016, 11:42 PM
RE: Now I Wear Slip On Shoes - by Achebe - 06-02-2016, 06:06 PM
RE: Now I Wear Slip On Shoes - by RiverNotch - 06-02-2016, 07:31 PM



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