06-01-2016, 03:34 PM
First of all - WOW. Just wow. Poetry is meant to act as a lyrical bridge between people for thought. For emotion. Elicit a reaction. On multiple levels, with but a few words shard by many, yet none too often does a poem truly make you invert those thoughts and evoke a reaction as strongly as this did for me.
Who am I? What is it that makes me, myself?
A name? A device with which others might call me?
We're I not named Chris would I truly be a different post? Would my track have gone broader had i been an Erik? Or Sébastien? Would it have stopped with the assignment of another?
Your idea for this was superb. I'm honestly too wrought with questions to truly do any true editing for this save that being descriptive never hurts. Go in depth. Explore. Find the track this was meant to take and ride the rails until life is laid bare before you.
Thank you. Truly.
Jonsy3k
Who am I? What is it that makes me, myself?
A name? A device with which others might call me?
We're I not named Chris would I truly be a different post? Would my track have gone broader had i been an Erik? Or Sébastien? Would it have stopped with the assignment of another?
Your idea for this was superb. I'm honestly too wrought with questions to truly do any true editing for this save that being descriptive never hurts. Go in depth. Explore. Find the track this was meant to take and ride the rails until life is laid bare before you.
Thank you. Truly.
Jonsy3k