Sweat -- edit 2

Sweat -- edit 2

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05-30-2016, 09:01 AM

Thanks for the suggestions! I've made a couple of changes.

Leanne: I was going for a more regular meter, but obviously I failed Confused

Practice, practice.

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Sweat -- edit 2 - by Lizzie - 05-28-2016, 09:16 AM

RE: Sweat -- short poem - by billy - 05-29-2016, 12:16 PM

RE: Sweat -- short poem - by Lizzie - 05-30-2016, 09:01 AM

RE: Sweat, edit 1 - by RiverNotch - 05-31-2016, 12:40 AM

RE: Sweat, edit 1 - by Lizzie - 05-31-2016, 04:16 AM

RE: Sweat, edit 1 - by RiverNotch - 05-31-2016, 07:20 PM

RE: Sweat, edit 1 - by Todd - 06-01-2016, 02:11 AM

RE: Sweat, edit 1 - by Lizzie - 06-01-2016, 11:06 AM

RE: Sweat -- edit 2 - by Lizzie - 11-26-2016, 06:22 PM

RE: Sweat -- edit 2 - by Achebe - 11-27-2016, 04:46 AM

RE: Sweat -- edit 2 - by Lizzie - 12-02-2016, 10:34 AM

RE: Sweat -- edit 2 - by Lizzie - 12-03-2016, 05:55 AM

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