05-29-2016, 09:22 PM
Perhaps 'Mother Goddess' would be a better title to go with the 'cocooned' theme.
The first two lines don't quite work with 'estranged' and 'billion billion breaths' - they come across as just so many words.
Unless I missed a pun or something.
The first two lines don't quite work with 'estranged' and 'billion billion breaths' - they come across as just so many words.
Unless I missed a pun or something.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe