Sweat -- edit 2

[billy]

hi lizzi, i had to google JWG but that was okay and i got the idea of what he was from the poem. would a semi colon help in the first line after sweat?
i think you could have used reincarnation in the last line. for such a short poem you give the reader a great sense of foreboding

Sweat -- short poem



Today I started to sweat still waiting
for my son to come home safe.
A terrible moment, my bowels forgot
that John Wayne Gacy is frying in hell,
his skin burning crispy like the chicken he peddled,
and I don't believe in previous lives.