Amphitrite
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the title opens the poem. while i enjoyed the read i never got much of her being a representation of the sea, if instead it was about her the wife of poseidon then i see no reason why she was away. the piece does have some cliche.....and i just realized i'm in miscellaneous .....an enjoyable read Smile

(05-26-2016, 12:02 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote:  --I was convinced that I had missed
--------your infinite blue horizons,
-shimmering empty expanse
-----and your terrifying
--unfathomable depths.

--When we met again
-----------I knew instantly that I had missed
-your intimidating growls,
--------------thunderous booming
--rumbles and roars.
-------Hissing, screaming,
-frothing,
------crescendo upon crescendo.

--Your whispers,
--------your moans,
-and your soft
------trickling lullaby gurgles.

Only then did I know I was back home.
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Amphitrite - by Magpie - 05-26-2016, 12:02 AM
RE: Amphitrite - by Cousin Kil - 05-26-2016, 05:10 AM
RE: Amphitrite - by Magpie - 05-26-2016, 07:14 AM
RE: Amphitrite - by Mark A Becker - 05-29-2016, 02:20 AM
RE: Amphitrite - by Magpie - 05-29-2016, 06:56 AM
RE: Amphitrite - by billy - 05-29-2016, 12:04 PM



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