The Whore's Prayer
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Nice one Mark.

The only complaint that I could possibly have is that it's not in the 'For Fun Forum', but that is more due to the fact that a lot of poems in that forum don't make me laugh. However this one did, whether that was your intention or not... I am guilty. In fact I was born with 'original sin', which by the 70's where I'm from must of been quite difficult, all the best sins were taken many years before.

Cheers for the read and good to see you back again,

Mark
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Messages In This Thread
The Whore's Prayer - by Mark A Becker - 05-29-2016, 03:28 AM
RE: The Whore's Prayer - by Leanne - 05-29-2016, 05:51 AM
RE: The Whore's Prayer - by Magpie - 05-29-2016, 06:49 AM
RE: The Whore's Prayer - by billy - 05-29-2016, 12:05 PM
RE: The Whore's Prayer - by just mercedes - 05-29-2016, 01:59 PM
RE: The Whore's Prayer - by RiverNotch - 05-31-2016, 01:04 AM
RE: The Whore's Prayer - by RiverNotch - 06-06-2016, 10:30 PM
RE: The Whore's Prayer - by DavidF - 06-06-2016, 09:05 PM



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