Struggling with Conversion

[Joseph Didis]

Unless the content of my comments indicate I did in fact not get it, my suggestions is only an indication you posted in Mild critique, not that the writing was not clear the first time around.
I might have gone over the top, it was done in the spirit of well-meaning though.

All the best to you and good luck with the poem!

Edit* I think your writing style is clear, my comments was a token of appreciation.