Drum practice

[Ivana]

Thanks all! I think I'm going to leave this sentence out:

What is it that you do
To get you through it all

It's too much drama and it takes out the flow. I've also added onomatopoeia (woosh tap) that hopefully offers a slower change to the last stanza, but I might change my mind about that.

Instead of Breathing in Breathing out, I'm going for Breathing in Bashing out, for now.

I'm also considering:

Breathing in
Breaking out
Beating skin
Pounding loud

However, I'm not sure if breaking out had the right connotation, because of its multiple meanings.

Ivana