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A Lament

A Lament
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05-27-2016, 01:30 AM
(05-27-2016, 01:29 AM)lizziep Wrote:  
(05-27-2016, 01:17 AM)Todd Wrote:  I don't why the text is so big where I commented on the title. Please don't read anything into that.
I get it dude, you hate my title! Hysterical

It was the Laundry Line poem that you said you'd come back to. Beg
I just did. Smile
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Messages In This Thread
A Lament - by Lizzie - 05-26-2016, 07:54 AM
RE: A Lament -- serious critique please - by Todd - 05-27-2016, 01:17 AM
RE: A Lament -- serious critique please - by Todd - 05-27-2016, 01:17 AM
RE: A Lament -- serious critique please - by Todd - 05-27-2016, 01:30 AM



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