A Lament
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Thanks for the comments so far! It looks like a statement of intent might be in order:

I intended this to be a lament for things that don't get to fulfill their purpose, whether they never existed, died too early, were neglected, etc.

The ovulation reference was very intentional. I guess we don't mow our grass often compared with other people!

I feel like you got it, Quix Smile
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A Lament - by Lizzie - 05-26-2016, 07:54 AM
RE: A Lament -- serious critique please - by Lizzie - 05-27-2016, 12:54 AM
RE: A Lament -- serious critique please - by Todd - 05-27-2016, 01:17 AM
RE: A Lament -- serious critique please - by Todd - 05-27-2016, 01:17 AM
RE: A Lament -- serious critique please - by Todd - 05-27-2016, 01:30 AM



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