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Drum practice
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05-26-2016, 08:54 PM
Very nice work. I really enjoyed the structure of the poem and the short, percussive flow of the words. Some of the structure gets broken up at points and feels slightly jaunty, which may be intended, but regardless it may be worth reading over to watch for where it feels like beats need to be added or taken away, depending on what you think feels appropriate.
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Drum practice - by Ivana - 05-18-2016, 11:51 PM
RE: Drum practice - by Magpie - 05-19-2016, 10:55 AM
RE: Drum practice - by Ivana - 05-20-2016, 12:30 PM
RE: Drum practice - by kolemath - 05-20-2016, 02:14 PM
RE: Drum practice - by Magpie - 05-20-2016, 08:34 PM
RE: Drum practice - by Joseph Didis - 05-21-2016, 05:05 AM
RE: Drum practice - by Ivana - 05-22-2016, 02:17 AM
RE: Drum practice - by Joseph Didis - 05-26-2016, 03:57 PM
RE: Drum practice - by Seanwd98 - 05-26-2016, 08:54 PM
RE: Drum practice - by Ivana - 05-27-2016, 04:40 AM
RE: Drum practice - by Magpie - 05-27-2016, 01:09 PM
RE: Drum practice - by PoetCraft - 06-03-2016, 03:29 PM
RE: Drum practice - by Vanity - 06-09-2016, 01:19 PM
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