Name Game

[Joseph Didis]

You have had me thinking for days with this one, really good job!

I will only comment on a short section that I have been thinking about a lot.

 
Joe the plumber    I liked the first version of these lines better, then they stopped me in my tracks and got me thinking.. I started thinking about that you could use the name John, or even Jane, in the sense "Then I'd be anyone", playing with John/Jane Doe. I think I like Jane more, as the poem seems to be written from the point of a man, Jane would imply you could even transcend your sex.
pulls pipes in Pittsburg.
Bob the builder
hammers houses in Houston.
 
But where’s Cletus the theorist?
Should have named him Theodore.
 

Cool poem, again, thank you for sharing it.