05-25-2016, 11:56 PM
Hi Sean, this probably would be better suited in the 'Short Poetry Forum'.
I'm kind of struggling to get anything from this, it feels as though it is a puzzle that needs solving and at the moment I am unable to solve it. I would include the title in the post with such a short poem so it reads as a three lined poem, which I'm sure was your intention anyway.
The last line reads as a question but could only be heard as a question with a rising intonation therefore I'm wondering if it should be in quotation marks. I'm intrigued as to what this is about.
Thanks for the read,
Mark
I'm kind of struggling to get anything from this, it feels as though it is a puzzle that needs solving and at the moment I am unable to solve it. I would include the title in the post with such a short poem so it reads as a three lined poem, which I'm sure was your intention anyway.
The last line reads as a question but could only be heard as a question with a rising intonation therefore I'm wondering if it should be in quotation marks. I'm intrigued as to what this is about.
Thanks for the read,
Mark
wae aye man ye radgie