Laundry Line, Edit #2

[Caleb Murdock]

I may be violating forum rules by posting a comment without making a crit, but in case you aren't aware of Richard Wilbur's great poem about laundry, I thought you should see it:

http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems-an...tail/43048

Please note that the spacing isn't correct in all the lines (on that page), but the text is correct.