05-25-2016, 01:47 AM
Beautiful execution on a theme that resonates well with me. 
I liked the Builder Bob reference, never heard of Joe the plumber before, but guess it matters little.
You could think if rearrangeing these lines though:
Were I a Joe,
would I be a plumber?
Were I a Bob,
would I be a builder?
Do names limit lives
as tracks limit destinations?
I’ve yet to know Cletus the theorist.
I also agree with Todd's comment that "unnamed" should end a line, maybe just cut "because"..The last line is a great ending anyway.
Thank you for sharing your work.

I liked the Builder Bob reference, never heard of Joe the plumber before, but guess it matters little.
You could think if rearrangeing these lines though:
Were I a Joe,
would I be a plumber?
Were I a Bob,
would I be a builder?
Do names limit lives
as tracks limit destinations?
I’ve yet to know Cletus the theorist.
I also agree with Todd's comment that "unnamed" should end a line, maybe just cut "because"..The last line is a great ending anyway.
Thank you for sharing your work.

